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Oh. Snap.

Alright, gave it a read through, picked out some errors and tried to smooth out some awkwardly worded bits for future readers.

This one didn't really end where I wanted it to on another note. I was moving along at a snail's pace for the entirety of Lance's out of doors experience, but suddenly he gets to the cafe, some wires line up in my head, then before I know it I'm approaching the DA text limit and have to cut it off early, which is why there are no monsters in this one.

...you know, aside from that one.

Also, THIS IS A SEQUEL TO 's SILENT PONYVILLE 2, READ IT FIRST DAMN YOU, WHY ARE YOU FOUR CHAPTERS IN AND I STILL NEED TO TELL YOU THIS?!